Monday, April 25, 2005

Don't Stay Lost for Long

you live on the surface
smiling and laughing
but tell me, how deep is your soul?
and where did your heart go?
i think you've gotten lost somewhere,
and you don't even know.
but i see you.
i know you well.
pretending to feel,
to love, to hate.
you lost your joy.
you stopped feeling your pain.
you are just riding on the days
waiting for the nights
not thinking of the hurts you make or
the people you drive by.
yes, i know your story.
i know your bad breaks.
but no one owes you nothing,
no one deserves to be treated this way.
own your feelings
stop with all these games
give up this fight...you aren't winning
sometimes it is better to feel the pain
stop being hollow
you're not good at fake
don't give up on happiness
try and remember those days.



I didn't feel like writing alot today - here is a new poem of mine.

more me later

8 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Sometimes we share our pain with others to make sure we are normal! I do not think that we are lost I say we are all traveling on a path, ultimately the same path and we fear rejection which is why we do the dumb shit like post journals on the internet. To force people to cover your back is a lack of confidence in yourself.

1:20 PM  
Blogger PLAYMISTY4ME said...

well anonymous,

yes it is true no one likes rejection my friend, BUT i am not afraid to keep on keeping on.

not sure what the last part refers too, but in my case - i never force anything upon people, BUT i expect what i give to someone in return.

1:34 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

The quality or state of being honest; probity; fairness and straightforwardness of conduct, speech, etc.; integrity; sincerity; truthfulness; freedom from fraud or guile.

This my friend is honesty.

1:56 PM  
Blogger PLAYMISTY4ME said...

OKAY ANONYMOUS

WHAT THA FA?

Thanks for the definition, but you see this is MY poem, about MY experience, which is HONESTY all up in your FACE...

So my question to you, is what are you getting at, what point are you trying to make?

2:11 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

love you and love this ... and you hit the nail on the head today.

7:49 PM  
Blogger PLAYMISTY4ME said...

anony,

love and smooches to you too, and thanks bunches.

6:33 AM  
Blogger Truecraig said...

I like this. This is good expression without finger pointing. I appreciate that style.

12:43 PM  
Blogger PLAYMISTY4ME said...

TRUECRAIG

much thanks BLOGGOD!

12:56 PM  

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